Tuesday, August 13, 2013

Dawn of the Apocolypse Book Blitz


Dawn of the Apocalypse
by E.S.P. 
Release Date: 08/09/13

Summary from Goodreads:
January 1, 2000.
May 21, 2011.
December 21, 2012

These are just a few of the days humans prophesied as bringing catastrophic events that would end the world. We predicted nuclear warfare. Drastic climate change. A call from God.

We were wrong.

Cue the gargoyle invasion—laboratory bred mutants designed to slaughter humans. When the government goes AWOL and gargoyles are swarming by the hundreds, it's up to the citizens of the United States to regroup and save themselves.

Meet Cliff Matthews, a teenage boy separated from his entire family with the exception of his younger sister, whom he is desperate to keep alive. Along the quest to save their lives, he encounters people who aren't all that they seem. Everyday's a battle, but if he can't trust his own species, where does that leave his family?

And we can't forget the man who may be willing to sacrifice Cliff's life, if it means world domination.

In terms of doomsday, no one could've seen this coming. The dawn of the apocalypse…


About the Author
Being the daughter of an accomplished author, E.S.P. grew up listening to stories and telling her own to classmates. After writing for several years and even publishing some short works, she finally decided to take the plunge to write (plus finish!)a full length novel. Thus, Dawn of the Apocalypse was born. When she's not writing, she's either reading books, blogging at whoistheserialreader.blogspot.com, or watching eighties movies.



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Excerpt:
Angel’s chest was rising and falling rapidly as the gargoyles circled them silently. Hunter had never wanted something more in her entire life than  to live for another day. She couldn’t even entertain the idea of little Angel being gobbled up by the big bad gargoyle…
She squeezed her eyes shut. Please, please, please, she chanted silently over and over. 
She knew the type of wound a scratch had given Cliff. What type of pain would they concur on her entire body? Would they eat her right away or save her for dinner? Would they pluck out her limbs and eat them one by one?
Time stopped as the door creaked open. The gargoyles soundlessly cloaked themselves back in the shadows. The stairs groaned as someone walked down the stairs without a care in the world. Hunter could practically hear the gargoyles lick their lips. 
She wanted to cry out and warn the person. But it was beyond her control. 
That’s what you get for walking down the stairs so loudly. That’s what you get for walking in the dark during a damn invasion, she reasoned. But her heart was saying something else.
The person reached the bottom of the stairs. The gargoyles uniformly shifted through the shadows. “Hey…” he said suspiciously. 
He had realized his danger a second too late. He broke into a run, but the gargoyles would be on him in a second. And he’d be dead.
“C’mon, sweetie.” Hunter whispered to Angel, crawling out from under the stairs. Ignoring the cries of agony, pain, and sorrow, she raced up the stairs. The wood banged against her ankles, but she didn’t stop. There was the cruel sound of cracking. Hunter shielded Angel’s eyes from the scene and dared to look behind her. 
The gargoyles were circled around the man. The predominantly bigger gargoyle bit his neck. A gush of blood spewed across its face. The man’s eyes still stared at her, his mouth formed in an O, as if he was trying to speak to her. 
“I’m so sorry.” She choked.
She hurried up the steps, slamming her body into the door. The light washed over her body, as did her relief. But her nerves did not settle. 

Thursday, August 1, 2013

Open Book Surgery












I'm smack dab in the middle of some massive revisions on my WIP (which I thought was about done until some recent critiques). I need to pick up the pacing in the beginning, revamp the plot, and develop my main character more. (Is that all? Yep.) So I'm shifting things around, bringing events that happen later into the forefront, cutting unnecessary scenes, figuring out and honing in on my character's motivations and desires. Basically, I'm doing open book surgery.


But wait. First, rather than jumping in and cutting and pasting away, I'm vegging, giving it time and thought, doing some character sketches for each character, and reworking my outline. For example, I've decided to have my main character start with one main goal at the beginning of the story (to sell the cabin she inherited from her father who she never knew and use the money for music school) and have that shift as she sorts through her father's belongings and learns more about him. Then she becomes obsessed with solving the mystery of his strange disappearance.

I'm moving some of those clues to his disappearance up front and adding some more in to beef up the tension in the early stages. My character needs to be more proactive in looking for clues earlier on, too, instead of merely stumbling across them time and time again. Really? Can't everything just happen by chance? No! There has to be a reason for everything she does and at least two purposes for each scene, ie: develop character and find another clue. Each chapter needs to build on the last and reveal new information.

I've got my work cut out for me. It's a process and that will take time, effort, and self restraint to plan and prepare, clear my head, clean my writing instruments before I begin to revise. I even ordered a new workbook on plotting called Ready Set, Novel, and am asking those writers I know who are good at plotting and character development for ideas on how they do it. Once I'm done I hope to have a new and much improved version of my story that's ready to send out to agents!

*Good news: my voice and descriptions of my character's emotions are good, two things I've struggled with in the past. (Hurray!) I can do this. Time to put on my gloves and scrubs and get to work. Ready, set, go!

Monday, July 8, 2013

Spirit Online Launch Party

Good morning! Welcome to the Spirit Online Launch Party!

I've had the opportunity to read and critique this book in the early stages, and I can tell you that it's a very unique and exciting world with fascinating characters and a cool magic system. 


Answer any or all of the following questions, but remember that those with the most points will win the prizes:

1/2 point:  Based on word origins (etymology), what is the actual definition of "awful"?

1 point:  What is the main character's name in Spirit?

1 point: In Shapeshifter's Secret, by Heather Ostler, what is the main character, able to shape shift into? 



Link back to the party: https://www.facebook.com/events/670309516317275/ to post your answers.  

The next stop will be Wendy Knight at WriteThroughTheNoise.
http://writethroughthenoise.blogspot.com/

Lauren Ritz

Author of Clean Adult Fantasy

Without A Voice, a contemporary religious suspense novella
The Storyteller, a short book of home grown fairy-tales

Tuesday, June 25, 2013

To Split or Not to Split Infinitives

To split or not to split infinitives? That is the question posed in an informative post by Bamasaltydog on The ABC Writer's Guild. What is an infinitive you may ask? Well, it's the basic form of a verb, ie: to + verb. To run, to jump, to sleep, to eat, etc. For a more detailed explanation go to:

http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/infinitive.htm

Before reading the blog post below on splitting infinitives, I'd never thought much about it. After reading it, I decided to scour a sample of one of my novels to see if I'd been guilty of the hideous crime. I didn't find any of the dasterdly devils. To me splitting infinitives sounds a little funny, old fashioned, or just plain unnatural. It also involves using more of those taboo "-ly" adverbs. Gasp!

For example:

       She wanted to lazily lie on the grass and simply watch the clouds float slowly by.

Ugh.

What do you think? Read the blog post below and decide for yourself whether or not to split infinitives. Then please leave me a note. Thanks!

http://benschwensch.wordpress.com/2013/06/25/tuesdays-tutor-to-soundly-deeply-sleep-perchance-to-even-dream-ay-theres-the-rub-shakespeare/

Wednesday, June 19, 2013

Percolating

I've been taking a little break from writing to research agents while I'm waiting to hear back from an editor on some revisions she suggested on a novel I sent her. (Fingers crossed that she loves the changes enough to offer me a contract!) Anyway, I've been writing everyday for almost 11 years now and it's a little strange not writing. I feel sort of lost, but it feels good to take a little breather for a month or so while I let some stories and ideas percolate.

In the mean time I'm still reading and critiquing my writing groups' novels and having them read and critique chapters of my novels. So, I'm not just twiddling my thumbs. Even though I'm chomping at the bit to send my novel out to agents, I'm holding off on it for now because I want to make sure it's the best it can be and feel like I need some more feedback on it.

Last time I sent a novel out to agents I got a lot of interest. Half the agents I sent it to requested pages, and although they had positive things to say about it, they said it wasn't quite right for them. I think it just wasn't quite ready. I've done another rewrite on it after having it critiqued by an author who gave me great feed back and said it was almost there but not quite. She was able to pinpoint the problems for me and hopefully I fixed them.

If I sell my novel, I'll be busy with edits for a while. If not, I'll concentrate on finding an agent for my other novel and maybe start a new project. I'm just not ready for that yet, because everything is so up in the air at this point in time. I feel suspended. Things could take off here pretty soon or I could come crashing down real quickly and have to recalculate and head in another direction. Patience and flexibility in this industry is a must.

Where are you at in your writing? Are you editing, writing a new story, or submitting, or doing all those things at once? Good luck with whatever step you're on.

Saturday, June 8, 2013

Blog tour interview with Mikey Brooks, author of The Dream Keeper


Today I have the privilege of hosting Mikey Brook's blog tour for his book The Dream Keeper. I've only known Mikey for a short time, but he is one of the funnest, nicest, most positive people I know, and I'm thrilled to be able to help promote his book. I asked him a few random questions about his book so you can get to know him a little better, too. You'll find his answers below, along with other interesting info about Mikey and his book, including an excerpt. Enjoy!

BIO:
Mikey Brooks is a small child masquerading as adult. On occasion you’ll find him dancing the funky chicken, singing like a banshee, and pretending to have never grown up. He is the author/illustrator of several books including BEAN’S DRAGONS, the ABC ADVENTURES series, and author of the middle-grade fantasy-adventure novel, THE DREAM KEEPER. He spends most of his time playing with his daughters and working as a freelance illustrator. Mikey has a BS degree in Creative Writing from Utah State University. He is also one of the hosts of the Authors’ Think Tank Podcast.

EMAIL: 
insidemikeysworld@gmail.com

AUTHOR LINKS:
Website: http://www.insidemikeysworld.com/ 
Amazon Author page: http://www.amazon.com/Mikey-Brooks/e/B00B8ICZ4W
Blog: http://writtenbymikey.blogspot.com/
Podcast: http://www.foreverwriters.com/category/podcast/
Goodreads at: http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/17727253-the-dream-keeper  
Facebook at: http://facebook.com/writtenbymikeybrooks 
Twitter as: @writtenbymikey 
WattPad: http://wattpad.com/MikeyBrooks


BOOK LINKS:
Hardback: http://www.amazon.com/Dream-Keeper-Mikey-Brooks/dp/1939993016
Paperback: http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1939993032
Kindle: http://www.amazon.com/The-Dream-Keeper-Chronicles-ebook/dp/B00CPE0PT0 
Paperback Create Space: https://www.createspace.com/4260677
Goodreads: http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/17727253-the-dream-keeper
B&N: http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/books/1115262781?ean=9781939993014 
Nook: http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/the-dream-keeper-mikey-brooks/1115262781?ean=2940016761121
Kobo: http://www.kobobooks.com/ebook/The-Dream-Keeper/book-HNZTMBHSwEmQvFtnDTAvbQ/page1.html?s=PgMlaS-n_kWtXFq9rPCQMg&r=2

TITLE: 
THE DREAM KEEPER

ISBN: 
Hardback: 978-1-939993-01-4, Paperback: 978-1-939993-03-8, EBook: 978-1-939993-02-1 

PRICE: 
Hardback: $19.95, Paperback: $12.99, EBook: $4.99.

TEASER: 
Dreams: Dorothy called it Oz, Alice called it Wonderland, but Nightmares call it HOME.

When an evil shifter takes over the gateway to the realm of Dreams, it falls to 14-year-olds Parker and Kaelyn to stop him. Their only hope lies with Gladamyr, the Dream Keeper, but can they trust a Nightmare to save their world?

SYNOPSIS:
Loser—the most frightening word to ever be uttered in junior high school. Even the coolest kids are afraid of being associated with it. 14-year-old Parker Bennett is no exception. He can’t even be himself around his friends for fear they might not accept who he really is. When circumstances force him to team up with Kaelyn Clarke, the biggest loser in the ninth grade, Parker has to decide what is more important; protecting his social status or saving the world. Nightmare named Fyren has taken over the gateway to the realm of Dreams, with the intention of controlling mortals, and it falls on Parker, Kaelyn, and Gladamyr – the Dream Keeper – to stop him. They learn being called a loser is no longer a fear, when compared to the terror of real nightmares.

In Praise of THE DREAM KEEPER:
“This really is a cracking novel. Action-packed and spellbinding!”—Cas Peace, author of The Artisans of Albia series.

EXCERPT FROM BOOK:

Parker was about to assassinate the general of the goblin army. I wasn’t murder; it was an assignment. He tried to justify what he was about to do as he jumped from the rooftop and landed just above the battlement wall. It was the perfect spot to scout the camp. The goblins filling the keep were everywhere, sharpening blades and axes or gathering weapons for the impending battle. Parker noticed a large troll in the right hand corner of the space below, hammering solidly on a sword large enough to split three men into six. He spotted his target. 

The general of the goblin army was a large brute with golden braids hanging down his chest. He was the one who had ordered the burning of Parker’s home village. The one who had ordered the death of Parker’s family and friends. This monster, this villain, was the reason Parker had set out on his journey to seek vengeance upon the unjust. This was the creature responsible for Parker swearing allegiance to the Mightercore army, who quickly gave him the role of assassin-scout.
Parker maneuvered his way down the wall, careful not to move too fast or his invisibility cloak would lose its power. He placed his foot in one crevice, then his hand in another. After a few moments of skilled climbing, Parker found himself precariously positioned just behind the golden haired brute, leaving only a small distance between him and his foe. In a quick session tactic, Parker could ignite his blade with the magic of the Mightercore and his target would be no more. He positioned himself to strike, raising his sword and whispering the incantation that would release the blade’s power—.
“Parker.”
He ignored whoever was calling his name; they did not matter. All he saw was the villain before him. The completed spell ignited Parker’s sword with a blazing haze of blue fire, and he had to act fast.
“Parker!”
The loud call startled him and he swung too late. The goblin general had already turned and he struck, forcing Parker back against the rocky battlements. Parker parried the attack and thrust forward with a low slash. The general sidestepped and lunged forward again. Parker parried and rolled away from the wall. A lightning spell was the only magic he had left. If he could find enough time to call out the incantation, he could have the general radiating electrons from every appendage. 
He rolled until he was a good ten feet from his opponent, then quickly stood. Lifting his hand into the air, he called down the lightning. The sky filled with a brilliant white light, and the crack of thunder reverberated off the walls. Parker briefly closed his eyes then opened them, praying he had hit his target. As the white dust began to clear, he made out an image before him. He peered at it, his heart thumping.
The screen went black.
“Parker, I’ve called you three times. Now get off that machine and go do your homework.

My interview with Mikey: 
  • How did you come up with the idea for your novel, The Dream Keeper? 
The idea for came when I really didn’t want it. It was late at night and I had to be up the next morning at 4am. I turned over and looked at the clock and it was ten after eleven. I moaned to my wife and she said, “Just wait and it will be 11:11—wishing minute.” I waited and wished to fall asleep. I remember thinking that it would be cool if there was someone in charge of escorting our minds to dreams. Trigger book idea: a story about a dream world where there are keepers responsible for escorting mortals to and from Dreams. When an idea pops into my head, that I love, it’s hard to put down. Let me just tell you I didn’t get to sleep that night; neither did my wife. I had to brainstorm a plot. So be ever open to inspiration because you never know when it’s about to strike. (Alice: Very cool. What a supportive wife you have!)
  • What made you decide to self publish? 
I have a quote that I read pretty much every day because it’s mounted next to my computer screen. It’s from the talented James Owen. “Never, ever, sacrifice what you want the most, for what you want most at the moment.” When I received an offer to publish The Dream Keeper traditionally there were things about the contact I didn’t like. I kept sending emails back and forth trying to negotiate some of the things in the contract and the whole time I had this quote popping into my head. I realized that what I wanted most at the moment was to sign this contract so that I could tell everyone I was traditionally published. How awesome would that be? But what I wanted most was to get this book done right—I had concerns about the publisher and in the end I made the decision to go on my own. I don’t regret my choice, although it’s a lot harder doing it this way. I believe there are great opportunities for authors now that weren’t available a few years ago. I believe a highbrid author, being published both traditionally and self-published, is the way of the future. (Alice: That would be a tough decision and take a lot of courage. Good for you for not sacrificing what you want most for what you want now. I love that quote.)
  • How do you capture that MG voice? 
It’s kind of funny because I don’t try to sound like a kid when I am writing my characters. Maybe it’s because I am a kid myself that it comes out so well. I have a fabulous critique group who at times will say, “Now, Mikey, a fifth grader would not say this.” Lucky for me I have them. I think the voice for middle grade readers needs to be fun, informative, and likable. How I do that, I don’t know.

(Alice: You're just a natural. No fair.)
  • Who are some of your favorite MG authors and why? 
I have so many! I will forever be a fan of J.K. Rowling. I used to have Harry Potter parties—HUGE ones. I was one of those crazed fans that wrote her letters and got replies. It was crazy—yes, I am a Geek. I loved her writing because I connected so much with Harry. I love Rick Riordan because he is funny. I love Jennifer Nielsen because her books always surprise me, and I love Brandon Mull because he writes the books I would have wanted to read when I was a boy.

(Alice: Those are some of my faves, too.)
  • How have they influenced your writing? 
I believe that any writer who wants to write a good middle grade book should read a lot of great ones. I have learned soooo much from reading other author’s works. For example, Jennifer Nielsen wrote The False Prince. The first chapter alone got her in a bidding war with several publishers. They all wanted her book because of the first chapter! So I read that book right away. I read and read that first chapter and took notes on the things she did to hook her readers. Its stuff like that I look for when reading. I love the pacing that’s done in The 39 Clues books so when I need to work on pacing, I’ll read some of those. You can take so much from others just by seeing what it is they are doing that makes there book shine so brightly.

(Alice: You were influenced by some of the best. I'm sure it shows in your book.)
  • Have video games influenced your writing, and if so, how? 
It certainly did for The Dream Keeper. Parker, my main character, is a gamer. I had to think back on some of the games I played when I was Parker’s age when incorporating them into my book.  He and his friends are into this game called Medieval Assassin. I remember when I played games like this you sort of become a part of it. I tried to imitate that into the book.

How do you work around your physical challenges with pain and stay so positive?

It’s not easy to stay positive, but luckily I have a great support team. As some know, I have Chrones Disease and Inflammatory Arthritis which can be very painful at times. I just have to keep pushing myself to stay positive. When I get down—I do have my moments—my wife is always there to offer me a glass of pickle juice (her way of saying, “get over it.”) I believe we all have the trials in our lives personalized for us. We are supposed to learn something from them. Take your trial and try to make a positive out of a bad situation. I do and it helps make it seem worth it.

(Alice: You're a great example and inspiration!)
  • How do you include humor in your stories? 
I think the moment you are trying to be funny is when you’re not. I like to poke fun at the little things. And it never hurts to add a fart or two in there—kids laugh at the silliest things.

(Alice: Ha! Ha!)
  • How do you plan to promote your book? 
Promotion is the hardest part about self-publishing. I am my own marketer and advertising campaign. Lucky for me I have lots of great author friends that help blog about my books to their friends. Thank you Alice! I also set up lots of giveaways on blogs and goodreads. I tried to get in as many places as I could. The best thing you can do for your book is to get people talking about it. The more excitement you can show the more excited they will show and then it will catch fire. Really how to the big publishers do it? They get people talking.

(Alice: You're welcome! I'm happy to help.)

Anything else you’d like to add? Advice for aspiring writers? 

I know that people hear this all the time but I am going to say it again because it is soooo true. NEVER , EVER GIVE UP!! Too many talented and gifted writers called it quits because they didn’t have the staying power. It is a hard journey but it is so worth it. It doesn’t matter if your book sells a million copies of just a few. What matters is that you book is out there and being read by someone. I am a firm believer that a book does not exist until it has been read. So make it happen!

(Alice: Excellent advice and so true!)

Thanks so much Mikey for sharing your insights. I hope everyone has enjoyed getting to know him a little better. Now, if you haven't done so already hurry and buy his book!

Thursday, May 30, 2013

Blog Tour: Siren's Secret, by Heather Ostler



My friend Heather Ostler's book, Siren's Secret, the sequel to Shapeshifter's Secret, is coming out on June 15th, 2013. I'm happy to get to host her book tour. She'll be having a book launch at the Orem, Utah Barnes and Nobel on June 15th at 6:00 p.m. She's planned a fun party and will be giving away lots of prizes. 

Book Blurb

Julia’s life has gone from complicated to nearly impossible! When Julia loses her shapeshifting powers and her appearance changes in alarming ways, she flees to Sirenity, where she learns an incredible secret about her mother. In this thrilling sequel, Julia must take greater risks and make bigger sacrifices as she discovers who she really is and what she can really become

Siren’s Secret Review

Julia’s transformation from a shape shifting werecat to a siren in Siren’s Secret, the sequel to Shape Shifter’s Secret, brings with it all kinds of surprises that stretch Julia in different directions and kept me reading to find out what would happen next and how she would deal with these unexpected challenges. 

She is forced to change and grow in new ways and try to figure out who she is as she grapples with a curse and a prophecy concerning her that contradict each other. Julia starts out doubting and fearing this strange person she sees in the mirror and this darker side of her. At first, she almost gives up on herself and others and on her former life and future happiness due to the curse and the bad image people have of sirens.

I found myself wishing she would try harder to fight the curse or find a way to break it rather than believing it and letting it discourage her so easily, but I like how, when the lives of her loved ones are threatened, she makes decisions, takes action, and sacrifices herself—whether right or wrong—to fight against the evil that threatens to destroy them. In the end she is able to use her siren abilities to help herself and those she loves and turn it into an advantage.

This is a great book for young readers (preteen on up). It has nothing too frightening or graphic and has  lots of suspense and danger, and just enough romance. Throughout the story Julia is transported to exotic locations that would make great vacation spots or theme park rides. An enjoyable read that kept me turning the pages all the way to the end, though I was left with some nagging questions that I hope are answered in the next book. 

Heather's Blog: 

http://heatherostler.blogspot.com/