Friday, June 22, 2012

Caterpillar Blog Tour Promotional Package and Giveaway!


Caterpillar’s Playlist


It’s no secret in my house that I can’t write with music on; in fact, I really need it to be completely quiet (which is no mean feat with small children.)   However, I do listen to a lot of music while I’m brainstorming, most of which seems to occur in the car.  

When I wrote the first draft of Caterpillar, I was spending a lot of time driving my oldest to camp and my twins to doctor’s appointments and visits with friends and on errands and other things you do with two toddlers.  As it happened, I was listening to a lot of Bjork in that era (I still am—am I dating myself?  Probably.)   There were certain songs that resonated with each of my three main characters, and I still associate the songs with the characters when I happen to hear one of them.  


This speaks so much of Cara early on in Caterpillar, who has most of her feelings to overcome her childhood.


Ah, Liv.  Well, as Cara’s older sister, Liv and Cara share a lot of childhood trauma... except that Liv never had the blessing of an older sister to mitigate some of what was going on with their parents.  Instead of going emotionally blank, as Cara has, Liv’s angry.  Really angry.


Will is such a melancholy character when we first meet him, he’s used to a kind of extreme intimacy that he hasn’t been able to experience in... a while... which leads him to Half Moon Bay at the beginning of Caterpillar.  And is there a better song for someone who can literally feel DNA? 

And for Will and Cara together: All is Full of Love http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjAoBKagWQA 

I don’t think this one needs explanation ;).  But if you’re reading Chapter Twelve, this is the song I had in mind when I wrote it.

I also listened to the radio in between my Bjork jags, and there were a few radio hits that worked for me:

Paramore: The Only Exception (Cara) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-J7J_IWUhls

I admit, it’s an obvious choice.  But this song works for Cara’s relationship with Liv as well as her relationship with Will. 

And Adam Lambert’s Whataya Want from Me (Will)

What can I say?  Will’s an angsty guy.  And this is not only a song sung by angsty Adam Lambert, but it was written by the uber-angsty Pink.  Et voila.


About the author: Kate Oliver is a writer of Young Adult and Middle Grade novels of every variety. Having worked as everything from a professional statistical programmer to a professional student to a professional parent, she now splits her time between writing and wrangling her children just outside of Washington, D.C.
Her first novel, Caterpillar, a sci-fi romance, will be released by MAB Books on April 10, 2012.


Wednesday, June 20, 2012

Midsummer's Eve Giveaway Hop


I'm hosting a midsummer's Eve Giveaway Hop from June 20th to June 26th. I'll be giving away a $10 Amazon.com gift certificate. Earn one point each for the following:

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Monday, June 11, 2012

The Versatile Blogger Award & 1st page contest with an agent!

My friend and fellow writer Lauren Ritz nominated me for the Versatile Blogger award. Thanks Lauren! Here's how it works:


Thank and link back to the person who sent the award.
Write 7 random facts about yourself.
Nominate 7 other bloggers for the award.
My seven random facts are:


1. I ran a marathon without training (much) with some friends when I was in college. I couldn't run for two weeks afterwards, but I placed 5th in my division. 
2. I was homecoming first princess my senior year in high school, but I didn't go to the homecoming dance.
3. I can tie a cherry stem with my tongue. 
4. I love sugar but I'm not supposed to eat it.
5. I fought forest fires one summer while I was in college and loved it!
6. I karate flipped the boy I liked in 3rd grade during a game of kissing tag when he caught me. All the boys chased me into the field but couldn't catch me, so they gave up. I shouldn't have played so hard to get. 
7. I never knew it would be so hard to come up with 7 random facts. 


The 7 bloggers I'm nominating for the award are: 
1. Pat Esden
2. Jack Flacco
3. Connie Keller
4. Daisy Carter
5. Kristin Lenze
6. T.Z. Wallace
7. Ashley Nixon

*Follow this link to find out more about the 1st page with an agent contest!



Friday, June 1, 2012

Angel Eyes Blog Tour

Post Date: June 1st


Angel Eyes: Excerpt One
The knot in my throat is constant. An aching thing. Shallow breaths whisper around it, sting my chapped lips, and leave white smoke monsters in the air. 
It takes them nine seconds to disappear. Nine seconds for the phantoms I’ve created to dissolve into nothingness. 
How long till the one haunting my dreams does the same? 
The absence of an answer makes my hands shake, so I slide the lambskin gloves out of my book bag and put them on. 
If only it were that easy. 
Like glacial masses shoving along, ice travels my veins, chilling my skin and numbing my insides. Three weeks of this biting cold outstrips the severity of my nightmares, but I haven’t suffered enough and I know it. 
“Miss, isn’t this your stop?” The man’s voice skates atop the frozen air. 
I want to answer him, but the words don’t come. A single tear thaws, escapes the confines of my lashes, and races triumphantly down my cheek. It soaks into my knit scarf—an invisible trail marking its life. 
“Miss?” he tries again. “We’re here. We’ve reached Stratus.” 
My legs are stiff, refusing to stand. I just need a minute. I should say something at least—answer him—but the knot in my throat refuses to budge. I raise a gloved hand to wrestle it away. 
“I’m sorry, dear, but the conductor is impatient today. If you don’t exit the train, you’ll have to ride back to Portland with us.” 
I turn toward the aisle and look at the poor man. He’s sixty at least, with a tuft of gray hair and an oversized bow tie. The kind you only see in the movies. He, too, is wearing gloves, and it’s a small comfort to know I’m not the only one chilled. His face wrinkles into a million lines, and the corners of his mouth lift. 
“Of course, if you’d like to return with the train, you’re more than welcome. I could use the company.” He gestures to row after row of empty seats. 
“No,” I murmur, standing quickly. I cannot return with this train. Not now. Not to the place where it happened. “You’re right. This is my stop.” I gather my bags and sink deep into my parka before stepping onto the platform. 
Why is everything so cold? 



Shannon Dittemore has an overactive imagination and a passion for truth. Her lifelong journey to combine the two is responsible for a stint at Portland Bible College, performances with local theater companies, and a focus on youth and young adult ministry. The daughter of one preacher and the wife of another, she spends her days imagining things unseen and chasing her two children around their home in Northern California. Angel Eyes is her first novel.
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320 pages
Expected publication: May 29th 2012 by Thomas Nelson Fiction 


Once you’ve seen, you can’t unsee. Everything changes when you’ve looked at the world through . . . 
ANGEL EYES 


Brielle’s a ballerina who went to the city to chase her dreams and found tragedy instead. She’s come home to shabby little Stratus, Oregon, to live with her grief and her guilt . . . and the incredible, numbing cold she can’t seem to shake. 


Jake’s the new guy at school. The boy next door with burning hands and an unbelievable gift that targets him for corruption. 


Something more than fate has brought them together. An evil bigger than both of them lurks in the shadows nearby, hiding in plain sight. Two angels stand guard, unsure what’s going to happen. And a beauty brighter than Jake or Brielle has ever seen is calling them to join the battle in a realm where all human choices start. 


A realm that only angels and demons—and Brielle—can perceive.

Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Agents: Interview #4 with Mette Harrison


I'm sad to say this is my final interview with Mette. Read on to learn her tips for finding and acquiring an awesome agent. And don't forget to follow the link at the bottom for a chance to win one of her books!


4. Agents
How did you get an agent?
I have a post on questions to ask an agent here: http://metteivieharrison.com/14agentquestions.html
How many agents have you had?
My agent is Barry Goldblatt of www.bgliterary.com. He is awesome. He is Libba Bray's husband (and agent), Holly Black's, Robin Wasserman's, Cassie Clare's, Shannon Hale's, and on and on. He should be high on anyone's list.

What are the advantages of having an agent?
Um, no more time spent figuring out where to send something, I suppose. You save some money there. But really, an agent is there to protect you when things go wrong. You think they won't, but they will. A contract gets canceled, an editor leaves a publisher, or any number of problems. You want someone who has your back. Also, international sales are a good thing. I couldn't do those on my own. My agent also helps a lot in terms of building community with his clients. He has a retreat every year where we get together and he can tell us all what he thinks we need to know about the changing business and also where he can ask certain experts to talk on topics of his choice. Mostly we just have fun and help each other out.

What should a writer look for in an agent?
A Mensch. Someone who is passionate about books, and about your book in particular. Also someone with a vision not just of how this book will be marketed, but how your whole career will look. Someone with big dreams, as big as yours. Also, it doesn't hurt for you to have some crossover book loves.

What questions should a writer ask an agent before signing on with them?
I have a post on questions to ask an agent here: http://metteivieharrison.com/14agentquestions.html that says just about everything I have to say about agents.

What is the best way to find an agent?
A personal recommendation is nice, but it's not a necessity. I would say query just about everyone you can find who doesn't charge a reading fee. You can find agent names sometimes in acknowledgement pages of books. Surprisingly, I have found I often turn to this page first when I read a book. Though I never write such pages. I believe they are cursed!

Tips for querying an agent.
Make your query letter short. Cut out the parts comparing your book to someone else's and about your credentials. It doesn't matter. Your writing is the only thing that matters. Don't waste the agent's time.

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I hope you've enjoyed and learned as much as I have from Mette's vast wisdom on agents. Now, make sure to go to writingsnippets.com and listen to my writer's group podcast interview with Mette on writing romance, and comment on her interview for a chance to win her book Tris & Izzie!


Monday, May 21, 2012

Self Promotion with Mette Harrison

Here's my third interview with Mette Harrison. This one's on self-promotion. 
3. Self-promotion
How important is self-promotion?
Oh, I am the worst person on the planet to ask about self-promotion. When I became a writer, I thought the job was for people who liked to sit in their basements for hours on end with no human contact but what was in their heads. I thought it was for people who didn't care what they looked like or smelled like.

I once was asked to speak on a panel about self-promotion and I said I didn't think authors should do any, because it was morally wrong. Readers should be promoting books and other book people, not authors.

So I've grown up a little since then, but I think no one really understands how one book seems to benefit from promotion and another doesn't at all. I guess the first thing is--do no harm. If you're doing self-promotion, make sure that you are being nice to people around you and that they will remember you fondly. Second rule, write a good book. Third rule, write another good book. Fourth rule, take a break and go to some conferences to meet people and be nice again. Fifth rule, write another good book. Eventually, the thing snowballs and you'll have too much self-promotion to do and you'll be wishing you were back at the beginning so you could write more.

How often do you do self-promotion?
I suppose I do it every day, in one sense. I'm on twitter and livejournal and facebook. I post every day. But it's also true that I think of twitter as my water cooler. The other people I talk to there are writers whose work I love. We talk shop and well, anything that interests us. On livejournal, I post musings. It's true that I am writing down things, but it also serves as a warmup for me. Once I've started writing about something easy, the panicked feeling that I can't get started is a little decreased. I hate that blank page. And facebook is actually partly responsible for the sale of two books to Egmont (one of them Tris and Izzie). I reconnected with my editor there and she asked what I was working on.

I think if you use any of those places as purely self-promotion in that you're trying to get people to buy your books, you will annoy everyone. I think it's about building a community and I don't talk about my own books much unless I'm using one as an example. I try not to hurt other writer's feelings even if I'm criticizing. I try to point out my own flaws.

If you mean book signings and conferences, I do those less often, maybe once a month. I tend to go to events where I already have a community I care about, so that during the downtime (and there will be lots of that) I am still doing something I love, talking to people who are interested in writing. So I don't do solo book signings. I've done one once in my life and it wasn't that great.  I do go to conferences, but only ones I want to go to anyway.

Does your publisher arrange it or do you or both?
My publisher arranged one book signing last year. I appreciated it, but in my local community, I actually know a lot more people in the book business than they do. So I usually send myself places. I don't ask for the publisher to pick up the tab. It's part of my business cost. But if I were doing a book tour or something, that would, of course, be different.

When you do book signings what do you do to attract buyers? (candy, balloons, readings, bookmarks? flyers? posters? etc?)
I try really hard not to annoy people who are shopping. I have started to bring bookmarks, purely so that I can show people new books coming out and give free things to people who are interested, but not ready to buy. Candy and stuff? I've done it, but all it seems to attract are little kids.

I think about how I would want to be treated if I were in the reverse situation (which I am, all the time). I ask people what books they like, if they are willing to engage me. I read a lot, so I almost always have something to say about the books they like. I just make pleasant conversation, and show how passionate I am about books and stories. If they ask, I tell them about my books, but I never NEVER push my books on people. I wouldn't want someone to buy a book just to get me to stop bugging them and then never read it. The thought of a book going unread just makes me sad. I feel sometimes like books are waiting on the shelf, pleading for me to read them like a puppy. I want to send my books to a good home.

How do you handle school visits?
I only rarely do school visits. Not because I hate them, but because my target audience is usually the older set and high schools don't sponsor as many. I have a great setup for elementary where I come in and have the kids write their own fairy tale, then give them comments and come back a second time to talk about revision. It works great as part of a publication program for kids to show their best work. I think public schools are struggling teaching creative writing because there is so much focus on grammar. I'm not saying you don't need to learn that. You do. But it's just that you have to turn off the critical editor part of your brain to get the creative part working. So I have to promise kids that when I read their stories, I will only ever write encouraging words about what I would like to see more of. I never correct grammar or spelling. It's a bargain I sort of make with my own mind when I write. That's not what creativity is about.

How do you get and keep the kids attention?
I think by just being passionate about what I do. Also, I try on purpose to find a kid who hates fairy tales to choose a fairy tale to rip apart. They think they're being distracting, but I need them to give energy. Anger and annoyance are great things to use. Fairy tales are boring the old way. That's why we're retelling them. So they're not boring anymore.

How long are your presentations at school visits?
My fairy tale writing workshop is an hour one week, and then another hour two weeks later. I also do a "How I Became A Writer" talk that last about 45 minutes.

You do a lot of conferences and workshops. Do you have any tips on presenting?
I just like talking about writing. I think about it a lot. I talk to other writers a lot. I analyze novels, stories, movies, TV. We all do it at our house. My husband is the work critic imaginable. He hates everything I write the first time around. He is a physicist, so it has to make absolute logical, mathematical, scientific sense or he can't care about it. Any way, I've developed a thick skin in some ways and can talk about writing to anyone. I don't really prepare for this because I do all those blogs and I have a monthly column with Orson Scott Card's Intergalactic Medicine Show where I write about all imaginable writing topics.

Best and worst experiences doing self-promotion?
Shannon Hale did a blog this year about mortifying promotion experiences. She linked to my blog about it, which is here: http://metteharrison.livejournal.com/290855.html. I am not a good salesman. Well, let me rephrase that. I am not interested in selling a product to someone who doesn't want it. For me, it is all about the second sale. When someone loves your book, they end up being willing to buy ANYTHING you ever write again. You have to actually write a long series of bad books for them to lose that feeling. At least, that's the way I feel about certain writers. They have undying loyalty. I think you can't pay enough for a book you truly love and read to pieces. I wonder if the digital age is going to mean that people end up buying paper books only for those books they love in this way, and if paper books will cost a lot because they will only be for collectors. But that is another discussion.

Best self-promotion experience? I went to ALA in 2008, when Brian Selznick won the Newbery for Hugo Cabret, which I absolutely loved. I went to the speech the night before and heard him and it was one of the most amazing talks about persistence and creativity I have ever heard. Then I was sitting at the Harper Booth signing The Princess and the Hound and I look up and see Brian Selznick is in my line. I couldn't believe it and I think I said something super articulate like "You can't be--But I'm supposed to be--You're Brain Selznick." And then I signed his book, which I think he said was for a niece, but he said he'd read my book himself and liked it. And then later I went over and asked Susan Beth Pfeffer to sign a poster for me and she looked over, saw my name tag, and said, Oh, you have that nice blog, don't you? The book world is a small place, and I felt for the first time there that I was really a part of it.

Any other tips for self-promotion?
 Don't worry about it. Think about the book. You'll figure the rest out later.
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Don't forget to go to http://writingsnippets.wordpress.com/2012/05/14/podcast-introducing-author-mette-harrison/ to hear my writer's group podcast interview with her and enter a contest to win her book Tris and Izzie!

Monday, May 14, 2012

Interview #2: Editing With Mette Harrison


Here's my second interview with Mette Harrison, YA fantasy author of Tris and Izzie. Learn some of her editing secrets that have helped her polish her own (and other writers' novels) and get them published and go to www.writingsnippets.com to listen to my writer's group podcast  interview with her and for a chance to win her book, Tris and Izzie!

2. Editing

How polished should a manuscript be before an author submits it to you for an edit?
To me? Well, I'm not a copyeditor. If you want me to look at your manuscript, I'm not going to make it all shiny and new. I'm going to rip it apart and show you the deeper flaws, so I wouldn't worry about the details.

For another editor or an agent, I would say you want to make your first 50 pages absolutely riveting. I'm surprised at how often people make the mistake of thinking that action is the most riveting. It's not to me, and I think to a lot of others. Character is what makes me care about the action. You need to establish character first. I think a smaller stakes conflict that establishes relationships is most important. That first chapter is usually what ends up getting written last for most professional writers. It was for me in every novel I've done.

What mistakes do you commonly see in manuscripts you edit?
I see a lot of people trying to tell a story that is simply too complex for a first time novel. Changing viewpoints, time frames, and so on. I'm not saying you can't do it, but it might not be the best choice.

The other mistake I see is thinking that the trappings of the novel are what readers care about. It's true in genre and it's just as true in realistic fiction. If you have great description, I don't care. Not until I see the other pieces in place. If you have a cool monster, don't care. A cool weapon? Don't care. A ten-page long explanation of the hereditary system of the kings, I don't care.

I love that more fantasy and science fiction is being done in YA, but I hate that the lessons the sff community has spent fifty years learning about how to do backstory properly have to be reinvented. If I open a book and the first chapter is all backstory, I am finished reading it.

Tips for self-editing?
Let it sit for a while. Honestly, let it sit even before you take it to a writer's group. You want to be able to have some perspective before you start making changes. This is a mistake I make myself because I am too eager to fix it.